For its length, this amazing piece is none the less powerful than longer pieces of poetic writing. Also, I nominated you for the Liebster Blogger Award. http://wp.me/p2tQ7q-5p
I imagine her, this omnipresent creator to be mother nature? The encoded bit reminds me of the genome program and the mapping of all DNA code that is happening.
Hi David, I like your interpretation, especially regarding the DNA coding! I wasn’t consciously thinking of that – for me the ultimate creator is not just Mother Nature, but the true nature of our own minds (just to get a bit Buddhisty on you). However, this is what I love about poetry – you write a poem, but then it gets rewritten in the mind of each reader. Your poem is cool!
Thanks Valerie, you’re so right, I hadn’t consciously considered that effortless efficiency, but it snuck into the form of the poem anyway. Thanks for the wonderful interpretation.
The poetry is beautifull crafted, along with the photo – its very cosmic. Are you inspired to write from the photoraph, or do write first and then look for the photo?
Michele there is a certain vibrancy that appears so alive in your site, your gravatar and the whole spirit of it overall. I think your smile helps also. I am bless by you always visiting my blog site and I wanted to say that, now I feel the spirit of the site and my heart smiles greatly. I feel certain blessings dancing in your spirit. God bless always my sister! Have a beautiful week ahead!
Encoded
Wow so you got Life in one sentence. Brilliant !
Ha ha, thank you Dianne. X
Reblogged this on gregorybateson and commented:
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flower to flower
Thanks for that Gregory, so glad you liked it.
Lovely rhythm and rhyme, bravo, Michele!
Thanks Anne, I’m taking a leaf out of your book with this one, and trying to say more with less!
Lovely poem, Michele. Seeing our creator through the creation is healthy.
Thanks Thomas – that’s an interesting comment! Healthy?
Short, sweet, profound
Just like your comment Kevin! Thank you
lovely post!
nice image and wisdom-filled poetry.
I’m learning from you Virgilio.
For its length, this amazing piece is none the less powerful than longer pieces of poetic writing. Also, I nominated you for the Liebster Blogger Award. http://wp.me/p2tQ7q-5p
Thank you! – for the lovely comment, and the nomination. Much appreciated
And yet, like your poem, “the complex dance” the seems so simple. Lovely and brimming.
Thanks Chris, I like the way you give your words the space to reverberate in your poems, and thought I might try a little of the same.
I imagine her, this omnipresent creator to be mother nature? The encoded bit reminds me of the genome program and the mapping of all DNA code that is happening.
Hi David, I like your interpretation, especially regarding the DNA coding! I wasn’t consciously thinking of that – for me the ultimate creator is not just Mother Nature, but the true nature of our own minds (just to get a bit Buddhisty on you). However, this is what I love about poetry – you write a poem, but then it gets rewritten in the mind of each reader. Your poem is cool!
Simplicity and brevity…All in a nutshell. I always think that She is so efficient, and it’s a good example to follow!!
Beautiful , Michele
Thanks Valerie, you’re so right, I hadn’t consciously considered that effortless efficiency, but it snuck into the form of the poem anyway. Thanks for the wonderful interpretation.
I nominate you for the Very Inspiring Blogger Award
Please accept & oblige.
http://ajaytao2010.wordpress.com/2013/02/11/very-inspiring-blogger-award-3/
Hi Ajay, thank you so much. I am honoured. And thank you also for the beautiful photos you post – they are amazing.
thanks Michele. I am honored you accepted the award
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The poetry is beautifull crafted, along with the photo – its very cosmic. Are you inspired to write from the photoraph, or do write first and then look for the photo?
Hi Bruce. Words first, definitely, and then I really enjoy trying to find an image that will expand upon the words. So glad you enjoyed it also.
Lovely, Michele!
Now I see why you liked the Margaret Morley post at ourherstory.net. One of her many works is/was The Bee People.
Buzz on, Susan
Ha ha, yes I really enjoy reading about all the amazing women you feature, so often they get lost in History!
Lost in history… found in herstory!
Thanks for sharing, Susan Bourne
simple, straight and awesome.
Thank you Nirmal! So glad you liked it.
It’s a talent that can make a big statement with a few words. Yours did it. Glad I stopped by.
Paulette
this is lovely Michele and a co incidence that i too wrote on the bee and flower just few days back…
Michele there is a certain vibrancy that appears so alive in your site, your gravatar and the whole spirit of it overall. I think your smile helps also. I am bless by you always visiting my blog site and I wanted to say that, now I feel the spirit of the site and my heart smiles greatly. I feel certain blessings dancing in your spirit. God bless always my sister! Have a beautiful week ahead!
Dear Wendell,What a beautiful gift you are! Thank you so much for your lovely comments, they uplifted me also. x
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P.S. I love your poem and the image embraces it well, making it shine brightly! God bless!
Your writing is just so beautiful, and deep. Geez. I’m pretty speechless, just in awe. Haha.
Ah, you’re sweet, thank you.